[更新版] 英格蘭愛國歌曲 詩化中譯 Poetic translation of English Patriotic Songs

 早前獲得城大一位老師的朋友幫忙，雅正本博早前的譯本，在此再次感謝她。
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Land of Hope and Glory, Mother of the Free,
How shall we extol thee, who are born of thee?
Wider still and wider shall thy bounds be set;
God, who made thee mighty, make thee mightier yet,
God, who made thee mighty, make thee mightier yet.

希冀之大地、榮耀之大地、自由之搖籃。
生生不息，皆源於祢，如何讚美？
遼闊大地、無際疆域；
神：誰給你力量，成就全能的祢？
神：誰給你力量，成就全能的祢？
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<! Britannia>>
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When Britain first, at Heaven's command
Arose from out the azure main;
This was the charter of the land,
And guardian angels sang this strain:
"Rule, Britannia! rule the waves:
"Britons never will be slaves."
天令初降 不列顛前，
蔚藍海洋 瑰麗浮現；
桓桓大地 旦旦誓言，
守護天使 唱頌連綿：
治世英倫 伏浪平險
不列顛民 永不屈賤

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The nations, not so blest as thee,
Must, in their turns, to tyrants fall;
While thou shalt flourish great and free,
The dread and envy of them all.
"Rule, Britannia! rule the waves:
"Britons never will be slaves."
求蔭未達 民族富盈
憑爾竭誠 暴君剿清
待爾培種 茂盛繁榮
伊等人民 既懼且羡
治世英倫 伏浪平險
不列顛民 永不屈賤

3

Still more majestic shalt thou rise,
More dreadful, from each foreign stroke;
As the loud blast that tears the skies,
Serves but to root thy native oak.
"Rule, Britannia! rule the waves:
"Britons never will be slaves."
爾等尚添 雄武威嚴
強悍敵國 每擊一戰
摧其之力 聲響震天
全力効國 固根磐纏
治世英倫 伏浪平險
不列顛民 永不屈賤

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And did those feet in ancient time
Walk upon England's mountain green?
And was the holy Lamb of God
On England's pleasant pastures seen?
And did the countenance divine
Shine forth upon our clouded hills?
And was Jerusalem builded here
Among those dark satanic mills?

Bring me my bow of burning gold!
Bring me my arrows of desire!
Bring me my spear! O clouds, unfold!
Bring me my chariot of fire!
I will not cease from mental fight,
Nor shall my sword sleep in my hand,
Till we have built Jerusalem
In England's green and pleasant land.

桓桓古聖先賢，英格蘭山踏遍︰
主之羔羊引牽，英倫牧草欣見！
天上神聖耀線，曾於雲山爍閃？
聖城之所興建，處惡魔之地焉？

賜我金弓灼閃，賜我欲望之箭；
賜我矛叢雲現，賜我戰車火焰。
不止余心內戰，不休緊握之劍︰
誠待耶路撒冷，英倫大地重現。